Friday, December 23, 2011

"The Silent Killer - 2"


In a bustling city,
Shrouded in thick misty fog,
Exists a cold expression,
An expression so blank!

The silent killer, the so called dark horse
His  face so clueless,
Immune to emotions,
A frozen look in his eye,

HE scans around,
The fake world,
And then HE makes,
The silent move!

Out in open,
In the face of the world,
He’s there to be used,
There to be exploited,

The boisterous world,
Has a glance on HIM,
And a wicked smile,
For an easy prey!


And HE ,......... is approached!
By the selfish world,
With selfish motives,
And then begins------‘THE MODUS-OPERANDI ‘.

A helping hand,
A friendly smile,
Words sweeter than honey,
Actions friendlier than relatives,

The cobwebs are spayed,
The spell is weaved,
The trap all set !
His doom ??--A winning bet!

An invitation thrown open,
An allure, so alluring,
A tempt, so tempting,
And the wait is ON!

The concealed pit,
The disguised skit,
Just Moments away !
But why doesn’t HE sway?

A puzzled lot,
The bemused souls,
A sinking feeling, a wicked laugh,
And just then!----the lights go OFF!

His victim crushed!
A deal is sealed,
And he walks away
The silent killer !

Not a word spoken,
Not a hint thrown,
As Unexpressive as a statue,
As motionless as a coffin,

In unguarded glory, HE doesn't bask,
THIS fake world deserves......HIS fake mask
An absolute thriller
Is the SILENT KILLER.....

Rohit


The silent killer-1

21 comments:

  1. Nice one, rich words nicely framed. You are getting better by every post. Keep going on. :)

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  2. I enjoy poems that also tell stories. Great job.

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  3. nice poem. it luked me as m a silent killer walking in a foggy night .. n ryt now m going to break the lock of atm n no1 knows whats running inside my mind lol. beautifully penned .. loved it

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  4. Well composed!! Are you the composer? If yes, no doubt you're good at it. :)

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  5. @Burhan,Ben: thanks buddies:)
    @Shreya: inspiring you are!:)
    @Someunspokenwords:I hope you aren't serious :)
    IdoIdo: Yes,I am.Thanks:)

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  6. Very well put and composed :)

    Merry Christmas! :)

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  7. Ah. And not in prose. Lovely.

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  8. not a word spoken
    not a hint thrown

    very nice silent killer buddy..
    Merry Christmas...

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  9. @phil,zeba,kalaiselvisblog: thanks:) A merry merry christmas :):) jingle bells!!

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  10. excellent job..lyrics are great..
    merry christmas..:)
    Tasty Appetite

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  11. Nice play of words bound together in an thrilling poem! Excellent, keep penning :)

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  12. Wonderful writing, Rohit! It was like reading a thriller novel! The last verse is brilliant!!

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  13. @Jay,Sujatha,Arti,Ruchi,Fiona: glad you liked.Your appreciation made my day :)

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  14. THIS IS AMAZING.
    You're good. :)

    Following you now!
    :D

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  15. A great narrative, this. Excellently done.

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  16. Oh, this is great! :) My first time here and I enjoyed your post..:) thanks a lot! :) Am new follower! :) I like the way you write, you penned with a meaningful words on it. Thanks.. keep sharing! :) Happy holidays! :)

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  17. @Dave :thanks a lot Dave!
    @Sagittarian: your most welcome here,friend!and happy holidays to you too..wishing you a very lucky 2012!

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